Tuesday, February 23, 2010
Out of the Dust
Wednesday, February 17, 2010
Toasting Marshmallows: Camping Poems
Kristine George's book brings the adventures of camping to those of us who live in cities or have allergies. (Ah-choo!) The free-verse novels in this book share the experiences of getting dressed in your sleeping back, sitting by the campfire, and enjoying the lake. The overall mood of the book is mellow and calm. While there is very little rhyme in the book, the poems have a sense of rythym and use figurative language to share the experiences of camping. The illustrations are beautiful and accompany the poems nicely. George expresses things in creative and unique ways such as feeling like a caterpiller in your sleeping back and how the moon is eavesdropping on our secrets. This book is a wonderful way to experience camping without getting itchy.
To share these poems, I would go to www.kristinegeorge.com. On her website, she has audio files of several of her poems. I would have the kids sit or lie down and close their eyes. We would listen to a poem and discuss the types of imagery each poem evokes for them. If time allows, I would ask if they have any camping stories, build forts, camp in the back yard, etc. One of the poems I would share is "Owl."
"Owl"
I hear you, Owl.Your one lone vowel
drops like a stone
in night's dark pond,
an almost-echo
funnels round,
a hollow sound.
I hear you, Owl.
The wind rush
of your wings
shouldered and spread,
pleating the night,
the satin flap
of your feathered cape.
Owl? I hear you.
I'm awake, too.
Outside the Lines: Poetry at Play
Who would have thought that poetry would make you want to jump up and run to the park?? Brad Burg's book of concrete poems about activities kids do when playing will make you want to swing, slide, throw frisbees and make sand castles. Some poems rhyme, some have meter, and all are fun to read. Let your eyes follow the path of the soccer ball, the "it" person in tag, or a firefly. The poems have a lot of alliteration, consonance and onomatopoeia that will hold kids' attentions. The mood of the poems are fun and really evoke the sense of playing and bring to mind all of the senses you use when playing, running, and swinging. For example, the poem(s) about playing baseball brings to mind memories of standing at shortstop, smelling the fresh grass and the dirt, and feeling the anticipation of the next hit coming your way. In addition to the fun of the poems themselves, the illustrations that accompany these concrete poems without taking away from the movement of the poems themselves. What a fun way to talk about fun activities!
If possible, to read these poems, I would take the class to the playground. I would have them do certain activities (such as take turns swinging, go down the slide, kick a soccerball) and then ask them what their words would look like if they were doing those activities. I would then have them sit while I sat on a swing and shared the poem about swinging. I would follow this with a short lesson on what a concrete poem is and ask the students to each pic their favorite activity then write a short concrete poem about that object.
"Swing"
*While reading this, imagine the words following your feet as you swing back and forth.
From way
back here
down
through
the
air
down
down
I rush
to
way
down
there,
then
up
again
up
up
I fly
to
where
my
feet
can
tough
the sky!
Tuesday, February 16, 2010
You Read to Me, I'll Read to You
Thursday, February 11, 2010
Dinothesaurus
In the library, I would use this book as an introduction to a unit on dinosaurs in a science class or before the class goes to a natural history museum. I would present the first poem in the book and choose a couple more based on the dinosaur skeletons that are available in the museum or that specifically address the curriculum of the dinosaur lesson. Here is the first poem, "The Age of Dinosaurs."
"The Age of Dinosaurs"
The dinosaurs
Yum! ¡Mmmm! ¡Qué Rico!
Pat Mora's book of haiku brings food to life. The food about which she has written is all indigenous to the Americas. Each two-page spread has a haiku about a particular food and a short blurb about the food including where and how it is grown, how it's eaten, and even where the name came from. This is a wonderful way to learn about the different types of foods and how they fit into the cultural "stew" that makes this hemisphere so wonderful!
When I began reading this book, I kept thinking to myself, "Why are all these poems three lines??" If I had read the cover page a little more closely, I would have realized that they were all haiku! The poems themselves are quite simple and express a lot about a food in just those 17 syllables. I have to say that I find this a brave step for Mora. Haiku is one of the most disliked forms of poetry by both children and adults. It can be frustrating and complex to read. However, Mora's haiku create a great sense of imagery that is complimented by Lopez's artwork. They are simple, clean, unique, and evoke the senses we each have in connection with certain foods. Children will want to taste the prickly pear, feel the roly-poly tomato, and taste the leafy jungle of the papaya.
To introduce this book, I would begin by asking students which food(s) they would choose as their favorite. Perhaps have them draw a picture of it and choose some words about how that food makes you feel. I would then read them my favorite haiku (see below). Afterwards, I would do a mini-lesson on haiku: 5, 7, 5 syllables, simplistic words, etc. Then I would have them write their own haiku about their favorites.
"Chocolate"
Fudge, cake, pie, cookies.